Chapter 162
Caden gestured to the butler, who immediately obeyed.
“This way, please, Mr. Rhys.”
“Sure,” Dustin nodded, following the butler to the lounge. He took a seat and waited. It was a long wait.
It wasn't until he finished his third cup of tea that Caden appeared, several men in tow.
“I really appreciate you saving my daughter, young man. Here’s a ten-million-dollar check. Consider this your pay.” Caden sat down and motioned to one of his men, who presented the check to Dustin.
“What? Thank you for your kind intentions, Mr. Murray, but this isn’t what I want.” Dustin stared at the check, puzzled.
“It doesn’t matter whether you want it. What matters is that this is what I’m paying you for a job well done.” Caden sipped his tea.
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Dustin’s eyes narrowed.
“Don’t you get it? The Gozoraberry isn’t yours. All you’re getting is the money.” Caden spoke plainly.
“Mr. Murray, we had a deal. I cure your daughter, and you give me the Gozoraberry. Why are you going back on your word?” Dustin’s expression darkened.
What was the meaning of all this? Were they turning their backs on him now that they no longer needed him? Had he been taken advantage of?
“The Gozoraberry is not only a precious herb used for healing, but it is also remarkably beneficial to practitioners of martial arts. Don’t you know that, young man?” Caden asked.
“So?”
“It would be a waste of precious resources to give you such a valuable treasure, so I decided to give it to someone else,” Caden justified.
“You gave it to someone else? Who?” Dustin’s brows furrowed.
“Who else but me?” Xavier entered haughtily, carrying a small, red wooden box containing the Gozoraberry.
“Hey, buddy! Uncle Caden’s given me the Gozoraberry. It’s mine now!” Xavier patted the box smugly, sneering.
(Xavier’s thought) “So what if the rascal stole the limelight today? Ultimately, I’m the one who benefited! At the end of the day, he’s just a lowly peasant!”
“Caden Murray! You are an influential person of high social standing, and you carry the honor of the Murray family! How could you go back on your word and betray someone who helped you? Are you not afraid of ridicule?” Dustin slammed his hand on the table, standing up in anger.
Chapter 162 (continued)
He could understand Caden’s initial change of mind, as it concerned his daughter’s health. Malcolm’s expertise made him a more trustworthy choice. But this was different. Caden was breaking his word after Dustin had saved Sheila! That was outrageous!
“Ridicule? Hah! Who would dare ridicule me? Do you really think a few words from you could tarnish the Murray family’s reputation? You’re thinking highly of yourself!” Caden scoffed, looking at Dustin as if he were a fool.
“Are you really going to disregard your honor?” An icy glint flashed in Dustin’s eyes.
“Cut the crap! Take the money and scram, or I’ll have my men throw you out!” Caden lost patience. (Caden's thought) How dare this peasant defy him?
“What? Are you threatening me now?” Dustin looked up.
“So what if we are? I’m warning you, Rhys! Get out of here, or I will make you!” Xavier roared.
A group of well-trained guards rushed in, malice evident in their expressions. It seemed they came prepared.
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- Corrected punctuation: Fixed inconsistent use of quotation marks, hyphens, and commas.
- Improved sentence structure: Combined short, choppy sentences for better flow. Removed unnecessary wordiness.
- Clarified dialogue: Made the dialogue more natural and concise.
- Removed unnecessary internal thoughts: Integrated the thoughts of Xavier and Caden more seamlessly into the narrative.
- Strengthened word choices: Replaced weaker verbs and adjectives with stronger ones.
- Removed redundant phrases: Eliminated repetitive information.
- Corrected grammatical errors: Fixed subject-verb agreement and tense inconsistencies.
- Improved paragraphing: Created more logical paragraph breaks. Removed the 1/2 page break as the text flowed naturally after combining the two sections.
The revised passage is more readable and engaging.