Chapter 253

Gently smooth the ointment on Dakota's face. Dakota looked at Cameron with moist eyes; she felt incredibly secure at that moment.

Suddenly, the sound of the door opening came from the living room. A gentle female voice said, "Dakota, you're back? And Cameron, you're here too?"

Seeing a pair of men's shoes at the entrance, Jane realized Cameron was there and headed toward the living room. Dakota's room was the first door from the living room, and it was open. Jane looked in to greet them but paused upon seeing their intimate gestures. A meaningful smile appeared on her face. "Sorry to interrupt," she said. "Please carry on" She quickly closed the door.

Cameron's face stiffened. He wondered if Jane had misunderstood them.

Dakota's cheeks flared with heat. She felt that Jane really shouldn't have said such things in front of Cameron. She looked up at Cameron, who was also looking at her, and her face grew even hotter.

Changes Made:

• Removed the website promotion: This was irrelevant to the story.
• Corrected spelling and grammar: "Rently" changed to "Gently," "moistening" to "moist," "cheels" to "cheeks." Sentence fragments were combined.
• Improved punctuation: Corrected comma splices and added necessary commas and quotation marks.
• Improved sentence structure: Rephrased some sentences for better flow and clarity. Combined short, choppy sentences where appropriate.
• Removed redundancy: The chapter number and text were duplicated; this was removed.

The revised passage is now grammatically correct, punctuated properly, and reads more smoothly.