Chapter 16: Businessmen
โMr. Chance, itโs an honor to have you here. Iโm thrilled about this meeting. Please, have a seat.โ
To Jaredโs surprise, Raymond wheeled his office chair toward him and offered it. Raymondโs enthusiasm bewildered Jared. Why the effusive greeting? All Jared had done was ask Tommy to introduce them!
โMr. Green, do you know me?โ Jared asked, puzzled.
โOf course! I was at Mr. Grangeโs banquet. Your bravery is still talked about. Steven Fisher tried to disrupt the banquet, but you sent him flying with one kick.โ
Raymondโs excitement grew as he recalled the banquet. Steven had led men from the Crimson Dragon Gang, terrifying the guests. Businessmen rarely engaged in physical altercations. Jared had stepped in, subduing Steven and earning the respect of everyone present.
Raymondโs mention of the banquet enlightened Jared. Now he understood the enthusiastic welcome. He regretted having Tommy arrange the introduction.
Jared replied humbly, โMr. Green, Iโm a sales representative here to discuss a deal. Thereโs no need to mention the past.โ
โI know, I know.โ Raymond nodded eagerly. To his secretary, he said, โEliza, have you finished the contract?โ
โYes, itโs here.โ She handed it to Raymond, who then passed it to Jared. โMr. Chance, please review it. Let us know if you need any changes, and weโll accommodate your requests.โ
Jared replied, without looking at the contract, โI trust you, Mr. Green. I donโt need to check it.โ
โIn that case, letโs sign it.โ Raymond quickly produced a pen and offered it to Jared.
Just as Jared was about to sign, Leyton stormed in with Sandy.
โMr. Scott?โ Raymond frowned at the uninvited guests. He could only tolerate Leytonโs disrespect because Cosmic Chemical couldnโt afford to offend the powerful Scott family. While Cosmic Chemical had a significant market share, the Scottsโ influence spanned numerous industries, inspiring both awe and fear.
Leyton demanded coldly, โMr. Green, Iโm here to discuss a deal. Our familiesโ talks went smoothly, so why are you signing with someone else?โ
โMr. Scott, we considered all options before choosing Sentiment Chemical Limited. As fellow businessmen, you understand we prioritize profit,โ Raymond explained smoothly.
Leyton glared. โThatโs nonsense! They sent a single salesman, and youโre signing with them? They must have bribed you! Iโm here to close the deal on behalf of the Scottsโan honor you wonโt get again!โ His rage was evident. Heโd planned to belittle Jared, only to become the fool. The thought of Jared getting the contract was unbearable.
Raymondโs smile vanished. His tone hardened. โMr. Scott, watch your language. Cosmic Chemical is my company, and I can sign deals with whomever I choose. The Scottsโ power doesnโt dictate how I run my business!โ
Leyton was stunned by Raymondโs defiance. Frowning, he roared, โYou dare talk to me like that? I could run your company out of Horington in a month!โ
The passage has been significantly improved by correcting grammatical errors, improving sentence structure, removing unnecessary words and phrases, and removing the inappropriate website plug. The dialogue is also more natural and engaging.