Chapter 21: Marry Me
โOh? Youโre here too, Master Leonidas? I think I know why!โ Falcon sneered. โYouโre here to heal Renรฉe, arenโt you? Iโve heard about the jade scepter you acquired. Unfortunately, itโs useless. Renรฉe has a โfrosty constitution.โ Using the scepter will only shatter it!โ
Erasmus and Leonidas gaped in disbelief. Falcon's knowledge surprised them.
โNonsense! Thereโs no such thing as a โfrosty constitutionโ! Leave!โ Leonidas swung his cane at Falcon.
Falconโs mention of a โfrosty constitution,โ echoing Jaredโs earlier statement, left Leonidas worried. He had to silence Falcon before he revealed more.
Falcon sneered, catching the cane. โMaster Leonidas, youโre too old for this. Your young wife would be heartbroken if anything happened to you!โ
โYou animal! Iโll kill you!โ Leonidas dropped his cane and kicked at Falcon.
Leonidas did have a much younger wife, but Falcon's comment was deeply disrespectful. Falcon, arrogant, retaliated with a kick.
Thud!
Leonidas flew backward, landing heavily.
โSenior, are you alright?โ Erasmus rushed to his aid, panicked.
Leonidas was astonished. Falcon had become incredibly strong in just two years.
Jared froze. Did I just sense spiritual energy? Is he an energy cultivator? He knew only Draco possessed such abilities; it marked one as an energy cultivator.
โAs I said, Master Leonidas, youโre too old for this. Let the younger generation take over! Iโm here to heal Renรฉe. Why the hostility?โ Falcon said calmly.
โHow did you become so strong, Falcon?โ Leonidas demanded.
โHaha! Thatโs my secret! But my mentor is now a follower of the Phantom Monastery. I might even lead it someday!โ Falcon exclaimed.
โTraitor!โ Leonidas roared. โYou betrayed us and now worship evil? You disgrace us! I will eradicate you!โ
Leonidas lunged, but Erasmus stopped him. They were no match for Falcon.
โYou canโt beat me. Iโm here to heal Renรฉe. Believe me,โ Falcon said impatiently.
โI donโt believe your kindness, Falcon. What are your terms?โ Erasmus asked.
โMaster Erasmus, Iโve known Renรฉe since childhood. After I heal her, Iโd like to marry her. Is that too much to ask?โ Falcon smiled faintly, his gaze softening as he looked at Renรฉe.
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- Improved Punctuation and Grammar: Corrected sentence fragments, run-on sentences, and inconsistent punctuation.
- Removed Unnecessary Phrases: Streamlined the text for better flow and clarity.
- Removed the Advertisement: The promotional text for the website was removed.
- Consistency: Standardized spelling and capitalization (e.g., Renรฉe).
- Clarified Ambiguity: Phrases like "frosty constituent" were changed to the more logical "frosty constitution."
- Improved Word Choice: Replaced weaker verbs and adverbs with stronger ones.
The cleaned-up passage is more concise, readable, and engaging.