The Mans Decree-Chapter 211
Posted on February 04, 2025 ยท 3 mins read
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Chapter 21: Marry Me

โ€œOh? Youโ€™re here too, Master Leonidas? I think I know why!โ€ Falcon sneered. โ€œYouโ€™re here to heal Renรฉe, arenโ€™t you? Iโ€™ve heard about the jade scepter you acquired. Unfortunately, itโ€™s useless. Renรฉe has a โ€˜frosty constitution.โ€™ Using the scepter will only shatter it!โ€

Erasmus and Leonidas gaped in disbelief. Falcon's knowledge surprised them.

โ€œNonsense! Thereโ€™s no such thing as a โ€˜frosty constitutionโ€™! Leave!โ€ Leonidas swung his cane at Falcon.

Falconโ€™s mention of a โ€œfrosty constitution,โ€ echoing Jaredโ€™s earlier statement, left Leonidas worried. He had to silence Falcon before he revealed more.

Falcon sneered, catching the cane. โ€œMaster Leonidas, youโ€™re too old for this. Your young wife would be heartbroken if anything happened to you!โ€

โ€œYou animal! Iโ€™ll kill you!โ€ Leonidas dropped his cane and kicked at Falcon.

Leonidas did have a much younger wife, but Falcon's comment was deeply disrespectful. Falcon, arrogant, retaliated with a kick.

Thud!

Leonidas flew backward, landing heavily.

โ€œSenior, are you alright?โ€ Erasmus rushed to his aid, panicked.

Leonidas was astonished. Falcon had become incredibly strong in just two years.

Jared froze. Did I just sense spiritual energy? Is he an energy cultivator? He knew only Draco possessed such abilities; it marked one as an energy cultivator.

โ€œAs I said, Master Leonidas, youโ€™re too old for this. Let the younger generation take over! Iโ€™m here to heal Renรฉe. Why the hostility?โ€ Falcon said calmly.

โ€œHow did you become so strong, Falcon?โ€ Leonidas demanded.

โ€œHaha! Thatโ€™s my secret! But my mentor is now a follower of the Phantom Monastery. I might even lead it someday!โ€ Falcon exclaimed.

โ€œTraitor!โ€ Leonidas roared. โ€œYou betrayed us and now worship evil? You disgrace us! I will eradicate you!โ€

Leonidas lunged, but Erasmus stopped him. They were no match for Falcon.

โ€œYou canโ€™t beat me. Iโ€™m here to heal Renรฉe. Believe me,โ€ Falcon said impatiently.

โ€œI donโ€™t believe your kindness, Falcon. What are your terms?โ€ Erasmus asked.

โ€œMaster Erasmus, Iโ€™ve known Renรฉe since childhood. After I heal her, Iโ€™d like to marry her. Is that too much to ask?โ€ Falcon smiled faintly, his gaze softening as he looked at Renรฉe.

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